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Post by ronnie on Oct 9, 2010 7:44:46 GMT -5
i'm a bit stricter about the audition requirements. to get a high position you must first-
• be active. have other characters that you role-play with are show us that you can be a good high position holder.
• be able to post with your high position as much as possible. we can't have inactive important cats lying around the site. that's no good.
• be responsible and take on basic staff requests such as accepting bios of cats from within that clan and adding them to the census, as well as coordinate activity in that clan.
• understand the position that you are taking and the duties of that cat. you must perform to those standards.
the form is below.
why do you want this position?
how active can you be with this position?
your experience with this position
referrals. list links to other sites you belong to
name
name explanation
age refer to "how to create an acceptable cat" for more information.
gender
picture
summary
appearance 250 words
personality 300 words
family
history 350 words
biography skills a biography will be pasted below. using what you know from this site's traditional rules and information, explain everything that you can find that is wrong with it as though you are talking to that creator. tell them how to fix it.
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Name: Bluetail
Name Explanation: As a kit/young apprentice, her fur took on a blue-ish tone (hence the 'Blue') and later in life, it became obvious she loved water and her appearance reflected the attributes of a blue, hence the 'tail' part.
Gender: Female
Age: 22 Moons
Clan: Riverclan
Rank: Warrior
Description: Bluetail is but a pale gray she-cat, commonly called silver, with delicate paws, a plume of a tail, and a slender body. Her eyes are a soft blue color, much like a summer sky at noon, and they are frequently clear and displaying her emotions freely. Her body is small, with long limbs, and she is sometimes known as 'pretty'. Despite the fact she seems almost breakable, the warrior has power hidden under her hide and makes up for her lack of brute strength with speed. Her pale silver coat is marked with slightly darker stripes, though all in all she's a light colored cat.
Summary: A small, pretty silver tabby she-cat with blue eyes.
Personality: Commonly gentle and understanding, Bluetail has always been a rational cat. Clever too, it's hard to hide a secret from her. She enjoys to have fun and sometimes plays with the apprentices as if she herself were still in training. As an apprentice she often tryed to take on more practice than she could handle, spending hours at a time working to perfect moves, and this habit continues on into her warrior days. She can be found either playing or hunting with little time for much else, but usually hunting. She has a certain connection to water some say, and she's always loved being around it. Bluetail is also a quiet cat, maybe with a comment here and there, maybe a quiet giggle now and then, but in general she's a cat of action rather than words, which is a pity because her words tend to be downright brilliant. Right to the point, right on the money, always seeming to say the right things. Though she's shy when it comes to speaking out -- and much of everything else actually -- which leads to her coming off as aloof when really she is just looking for the right time to step in. She is motherly towards kits, but exceptionally hostile and untrusting of outsiders, tending to keep herself to her own clan to which she is fiercely defensive of, maybe even overdefensive. Bluetail focuses on everyday warrior duties and shows no signs of longing for a mate or kits of her own.
Family: Roseflower, mother, deceased. Deweye, father, deceased. Dustpaw, brother, deceased.
History: Bluekit was, from the start, a very bubbly and playful kitten. She was her brother's shadow, and he led her everywhere, often getting her into trouble. Their father died when the kits were young so they don't remember much about him, but Bluekit was as close to her mother as any kit would be. She was merely average in every possible way. Her brother began to become dark, perhaps even sadistic, bullying Bluekit into doing things she didn't want to do and lying for him, often taking the blame without complaint. Being the little sister, Dustkit controlled her. One day, he forced her to poke at a fox trap (which she did) and the expected happened; she got her paw trapped in it. Dustkit lied, saying he had tries to stop her but she wouldn't listen but at last the adults saw sense, and knew Dustkit was lying. They punished him, but still Bluekit saw her brother become an apprentice first as she sat in the medicine cat's den healing. He was a few weeks ahead of her in training but she powerhoused past him, soon becoming a star pupil. Even though Dustpaw still influenced her, Bluepaw's mentor was a fine cat who tried to steer her in the right direction. He was impressed by how Bluepaw mastered moves and then craved more advanced ones; she was progressing much faster than expected though her paw still gave her some trouble. Dustpaw's antics remained fairly innocent until one day, when the two were playing near the river. It was almost the middle of leafbare and the river had a thin coating of ice on it, and Dustpaw dared Bluepaw to wander onto the ice. She declined, as the ice would not support her she knew, but he persisted. At last, enraged at her and trying to show her she was wrong, he walked onto the ice. Despite her best attempts, she couldn't save her much larger brother and he was unable to haul himself from the water. Unlike the sleek Bluepaw, he was a scruffy longhair and this weighed him down. He was swept away and his body found days later. Bluepaw was, of course, distraught but eager to continue training and unwilling to fall behind. She was quite a fine warrior and was named such with two good friends by her side, but since then their friendship has faded.
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role-play prompt respond to this prompt the way your character would in this situation. please be realistic here.
it is a mid leaf-bare morning. you are sending out the hunting patrols and border patrols when you notice that the fresh-kill pile is completely empty. patrols come back later that evening with nothing to show for their day of hunting. the queens and elders are starving and there is nothing the clan can do to catch anything. what do you do?
[b]why do you want this position?[/b]
[b]how active can you be with this position?[/b]
[b]your experience with this position[/b]
[b]referrals. list links to other sites you belong to[/b]
[b]name[/b]
[b]name explanation[/b]
[b]age[/b] refer to "how to create an acceptable cat" for more information.
[b]gender[/b]
[b]picture[/b]
[b]summary[/b]
[b]appearance[/b] 250 words
[b]personality[/b] 300 words
[b]family[/b]
[b]history[/b] 350 words
[b]biography skills[/b] a biography will be pasted below. using what you know from this site's traditional rules and information, explain everything that you can find that is wrong with it as though you are talking to that creator. tell them how to fix it.
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[b]Name:[/b] Bluetail
[b]Name Explanation:[/b] As a kit/young apprentice, her fur took on a blue-ish tone (hence the 'Blue') and later in life, it became obvious she loved water and her appearance reflected the attributes of a blue, hence the 'tail' part.
[b]Gender:[/b] Female
[B]Age:[/b] 22 Moons
[b]Clan:[/b] Riverclan
[b]Rank:[/b] Warrior
[b]Description:[/b] Bluetail is but a pale gray she-cat, commonly called silver, with delicate paws, a plume of a tail, and a slender body. Her eyes are a soft blue color, much like a summer sky at noon, and they are frequently clear and displaying her emotions freely. Her body is small, with long limbs, and she is sometimes known as 'pretty'. Despite the fact she seems almost breakable, the warrior has power hidden under her hide and makes up for her lack of brute strength with speed. Her pale silver coat is marked with slightly darker stripes, though all in all she's a light colored cat.
[b]Summary:[/b] A small, pretty silver tabby she-cat with blue eyes.
[b]Personality:[/b] Commonly gentle and understanding, Bluetail has always been a rational cat. Clever too, it's hard to hide a secret from her. She enjoys to have fun and sometimes plays with the apprentices as if she herself were still in training. As an apprentice she often tryed to take on more practice than she could handle, spending hours at a time working to perfect moves, and this habit continues on into her warrior days. She can be found either playing or hunting with little time for much else, but usually hunting. She has a certain connection to water some say, and she's always loved being around it. Bluetail is also a quiet cat, maybe with a comment here and there, maybe a quiet giggle now and then, but in general she's a cat of action rather than words, which is a pity because her words tend to be downright brilliant. Right to the point, right on the money, always seeming to say the right things. Though she's shy when it comes to speaking out -- and much of everything else actually -- which leads to her coming off as aloof when really she is just looking for the right time to step in. She is motherly towards kits, but exceptionally hostile and untrusting of outsiders, tending to keep herself to her own clan to which she is fiercely defensive of, maybe even overdefensive. Bluetail focuses on everyday warrior duties and shows no signs of longing for a mate or kits of her own.
[b]Family:[/b] Roseflower, mother, deceased. Deweye, father, deceased. Dustpaw, brother, deceased.
[b]History:[/b] Bluekit was, from the start, a very bubbly and playful kitten. She was her brother's shadow, and he led her everywhere, often getting her into trouble. Their father died when the kits were young so they don't remember much about him, but Bluekit was as close to her mother as any kit would be. She was merely average in every possible way. Her brother began to become dark, perhaps even sadistic, bullying Bluekit into doing things she didn't want to do and lying for him, often taking the blame without complaint. Being the little sister, Dustkit controlled her. One day, he forced her to poke at a fox trap (which she did) and the expected happened; she got her paw trapped in it. Dustkit lied, saying he had tries to stop her but she wouldn't listen but at last the adults saw sense, and knew Dustkit was lying. They punished him, but still Bluekit saw her brother become an apprentice first as she sat in the medicine cat's den healing. He was a few weeks ahead of her in training but she powerhoused past him, soon becoming a star pupil. Even though Dustpaw still influenced her, Bluepaw's mentor was a fine cat who tried to steer her in the right direction. He was impressed by how Bluepaw mastered moves and then craved more advanced ones; she was progressing much faster than expected though her paw still gave her some trouble. Dustpaw's antics remained fairly innocent until one day, when the two were playing near the river. It was almost the middle of leafbare and the river had a thin coating of ice on it, and Dustpaw dared Bluepaw to wander onto the ice. She declined, as the ice would not support her she knew, but he persisted. At last, enraged at her and trying to show her she was wrong, he walked onto the ice. Despite her best attempts, she couldn't save her much larger brother and he was unable to haul himself from the water. Unlike the sleek Bluepaw, he was a scruffy longhair and this weighed him down. He was swept away and his body found days later. Bluepaw was, of course, distraught but eager to continue training and unwilling to fall behind. She was quite a fine warrior and was named such with two good friends by her side, but since then their friendship has faded.
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[b]role-play prompt[/b] respond to this prompt the way your character would in this situation. please be realistic here.
[i]it is a mid leaf-bare morning. you are sending out the hunting patrols and border patrols when you notice that the fresh-kill pile is completely empty. patrols come back later that evening with nothing to show for their day of hunting. the queens and elders are starving and there is nothing the clan can do to catch anything. what do you do?[/i]
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